Pen and Ink 10- Melancholy ver. 2

I wanted to try this one again, from memory, and see how close I could get to the original. I tried to improve here and there, but this was ultimately a product of boredom, as I'm waiting for my laundry to finish 😅 I'd be interested to hear what everyone thinks of the differences between the two, good or bad. I should also stop doing these on post-it notes 😓